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Log inannye0ng~*update the title s0on...
annye0ng~*update the title s0on...
by ❤gigid on Thu Jul 17, 2008 3:46 am
annye0ng...
i kn0w the title is stupid...
but f0r s0me reas0n...
i cnt think of a g0od title...
this is my first fanfic..
h0pe u lyk the story th0ugh..
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CHAPTER ONE
Friday Evening:July 11, 2008 8:30pm(DBSK arrived in Sydney Internati0nal Airport for their first ever c0ncert in Australia)
xiah:hello australia!
hero:this looks like a c0ol place
*mickey puts his hand around max's shoulder
mickey:hey max,wat i kn0w is that there are a lot of cute girls here..let's find ur match
max:aii hyung~st0p talking ab0ut girls..i dnt know about u but I can't wait to arrive in the hotel i'm s0o hungry
hero and xiah:haizz :tellu: ~y0u always talk ab0ut f0od!
*SMACK*
(hero,xiah,mickey and yunho smack max's head)
The car came to pick them up and bring them to the hotel..
In the Hotel:
max:at last we arrived in the hotel,n0w where's the f0od?? :cool:
yuhno:stop talking ab0ut ur f0od and let's g0 t0 our r0oms
max:ok but after that we g0 t0 our r0oms we g0 eat,pr0mise? :like:
yuhno:yeah,whatever..
They arrived in their ro0ms..
xiah:w0w..this ro0m's huge!
max:yeah and s0 neat!
hero:st0p it y0u guys..let's unpack our stuff...and max if we d0n't hurry the f0od might be all g0ne!
max:waah all g0ne?! :what: we must hurry!!
As expected max was the one wh0 finished unpacking first and w0n't quit quit nagging the others t0 hurry.
xiah:hey max..quit nagging us...if y0u w0n't st0p we w0n't be able t0 finish this!
yunho:yeah max...why d0n't y0u jst help us!
Max quickly help all of them unpack and after a few minutes they were d0ne..
So they all went to the h0tel's restaurant t0 eat.
max:waah,i'm s0 full.The f0od here are s0 delici0us,even better than hyung's c0oking.
hero:wat did u jst said?? :wtf:
max:uhm..i said that their c0oking is g0od but n0t as g0od as y0urs. :like2:
hero:yah i kn0w that.
yuhn0:stop it y0u t0o...let's g0 back t0 our r0oms and rest
They all went back t0 their r0oms t0 tidy up then gathered themselves in the living r0om.
Then their manager came.
manager:d0 u all like this place?
xiah:yes,hyung...this place is huge..
max: yeah the f0od's delici0us t0o.
manager: that's g0od t0 hear..by the way the c0ncert is still 3 days away s0 y0u still have time t0 rest and t0ur ar0und the place..t0morr0w i b0oked a private t0ur at 10am...s0 y0u better be early alright..?.
all:yes hyung..
manager:ok s0 that's all f0r t0day...y0u better have s0me rest and i have t0 g0..
all:bye hyung~
The manager left. They decided t0 watch the DVDs that xiah brought t0 pass time..
After a few h0urs they fell asleep on the living r0om fl0or..except f0r jaej0ong wh0 was thinking of what t0 d0 the next day..
In his mind...
hmm...i'm s0 excited ab0ut t0morr0w but f0r s0me reas0n i think i want t0 be al0ne and be away fr0m the gr0up f0r a m0ment t0 freshen up my mind. But i think hyung w0uld be mad..I d0n't even kn0w the place..
After all his thinking,he have an idea..
why d0n't i just t0ur al0ne and leave early bef0re the t0ur starts and bef0re the others wake up..but still,i think they w0uld be w0rried...
He just stick t0 his idea and went t0 sleep..
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The next day,
July 12, 2008 7am
On this day, gigi and her friends are g0ing to the city t0 spend time t0gether and g0 sh0pping..
In gigi's h0me...
gigi: waah! Today's the day!..i sh0uld hurry and g0 first...
A few minutes later..
m0m:gigi...breakfast is ready...
gigi:yes m0m!
Gigi hurried d0wnstairs and eat breakfast...
gigi:m0m i'm g0ing!!...
m0m:ok bye!
dad:but be h0me bef0re 8pm!
gigi:yes!
She went t0 the bus st0p and waited f0r her bus..
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Back at the h0tel...
hero:it's 7:30am...i sh0uld get g0ing bef0re the others wakes up..i w0nder where i sh0uld g0 first??..i d0n't even kn0w this place...
He left a letter t0 the others t0 let them kn0w that he left...
Jaejoong started walking...
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Gigi arrived in the city...
gigi:ahh...it's only 7:32am...i still have a lot of time..uhm...where sh0uld i g0 first??
Suddenly,she bumped into a guy..
gigi:ouch that hurts....uhm s0rry...
hero:oh..i'm s0rry...are y0u alright??..s0rry but i g0t t0 g0...
gigi:(uhm i kn0w this v0ice)
(she saw a wallet fell fr0m the guy's bag)
She picked it up and ran after him...
gigi:hey wait!!
hero:huh?..
gigi:here...y0ur wallet fell fr0m y0ur bag...
hero:thanks..
gigi:hey i kn0w y0u...
hero:hmm??..
gigi:y0u're kim jaejoong!
hero:sshhh!...l0w y0ur v0ice d0wn..
gigi:oh s0rry...
gigi:by the way y0u are n0t familiar with this place right??
hero:well actually...
(he didn't finished his sentence)
gigi:ok then,c0me with me..
She quickly grabbed his hand and dragged him along...
end of chapter one
please d0 c0mment~ :thanks:
i kn0w the title is stupid...
but f0r s0me reas0n...
i cnt think of a g0od title...
this is my first fanfic..
h0pe u lyk the story th0ugh..
--------------------------------------------------------------------------
CHAPTER ONE
Friday Evening:July 11, 2008 8:30pm(DBSK arrived in Sydney Internati0nal Airport for their first ever c0ncert in Australia)
xiah:hello australia!
hero:this looks like a c0ol place
*mickey puts his hand around max's shoulder
mickey:hey max,wat i kn0w is that there are a lot of cute girls here..let's find ur match
max:aii hyung~st0p talking ab0ut girls..i dnt know about u but I can't wait to arrive in the hotel i'm s0o hungry
hero and xiah:haizz :tellu: ~y0u always talk ab0ut f0od!
*SMACK*
(hero,xiah,mickey and yunho smack max's head)
The car came to pick them up and bring them to the hotel..
In the Hotel:
max:at last we arrived in the hotel,n0w where's the f0od?? :cool:
yuhno:stop talking ab0ut ur f0od and let's g0 t0 our r0oms
max:ok but after that we g0 t0 our r0oms we g0 eat,pr0mise? :like:
yuhno:yeah,whatever..
They arrived in their ro0ms..
xiah:w0w..this ro0m's huge!
max:yeah and s0 neat!
hero:st0p it y0u guys..let's unpack our stuff...and max if we d0n't hurry the f0od might be all g0ne!
max:waah all g0ne?! :what: we must hurry!!
As expected max was the one wh0 finished unpacking first and w0n't quit quit nagging the others t0 hurry.
xiah:hey max..quit nagging us...if y0u w0n't st0p we w0n't be able t0 finish this!
yunho:yeah max...why d0n't y0u jst help us!
Max quickly help all of them unpack and after a few minutes they were d0ne..
So they all went to the h0tel's restaurant t0 eat.
max:waah,i'm s0 full.The f0od here are s0 delici0us,even better than hyung's c0oking.
hero:wat did u jst said?? :wtf:
max:uhm..i said that their c0oking is g0od but n0t as g0od as y0urs. :like2:
hero:yah i kn0w that.
yuhn0:stop it y0u t0o...let's g0 back t0 our r0oms and rest
They all went back t0 their r0oms t0 tidy up then gathered themselves in the living r0om.
Then their manager came.
manager:d0 u all like this place?
xiah:yes,hyung...this place is huge..
max: yeah the f0od's delici0us t0o.
manager: that's g0od t0 hear..by the way the c0ncert is still 3 days away s0 y0u still have time t0 rest and t0ur ar0und the place..t0morr0w i b0oked a private t0ur at 10am...s0 y0u better be early alright..?.
all:yes hyung..
manager:ok s0 that's all f0r t0day...y0u better have s0me rest and i have t0 g0..
all:bye hyung~
The manager left. They decided t0 watch the DVDs that xiah brought t0 pass time..
After a few h0urs they fell asleep on the living r0om fl0or..except f0r jaej0ong wh0 was thinking of what t0 d0 the next day..
In his mind...
hmm...i'm s0 excited ab0ut t0morr0w but f0r s0me reas0n i think i want t0 be al0ne and be away fr0m the gr0up f0r a m0ment t0 freshen up my mind. But i think hyung w0uld be mad..I d0n't even kn0w the place..
After all his thinking,he have an idea..
why d0n't i just t0ur al0ne and leave early bef0re the t0ur starts and bef0re the others wake up..but still,i think they w0uld be w0rried...
He just stick t0 his idea and went t0 sleep..
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The next day,
July 12, 2008 7am
On this day, gigi and her friends are g0ing to the city t0 spend time t0gether and g0 sh0pping..
In gigi's h0me...
gigi: waah! Today's the day!..i sh0uld hurry and g0 first...
A few minutes later..
m0m:gigi...breakfast is ready...
gigi:yes m0m!
Gigi hurried d0wnstairs and eat breakfast...
gigi:m0m i'm g0ing!!...
m0m:ok bye!
dad:but be h0me bef0re 8pm!
gigi:yes!
She went t0 the bus st0p and waited f0r her bus..
---------------------------------------------------------------------------------------
Back at the h0tel...
hero:it's 7:30am...i sh0uld get g0ing bef0re the others wakes up..i w0nder where i sh0uld g0 first??..i d0n't even kn0w this place...
He left a letter t0 the others t0 let them kn0w that he left...
Jaejoong started walking...
-------------------------------------------------------------------------------------
Gigi arrived in the city...
gigi:ahh...it's only 7:32am...i still have a lot of time..uhm...where sh0uld i g0 first??
Suddenly,she bumped into a guy..
gigi:ouch that hurts....uhm s0rry...
hero:oh..i'm s0rry...are y0u alright??..s0rry but i g0t t0 g0...
gigi:(uhm i kn0w this v0ice)
(she saw a wallet fell fr0m the guy's bag)
She picked it up and ran after him...
gigi:hey wait!!
hero:huh?..
gigi:here...y0ur wallet fell fr0m y0ur bag...
hero:thanks..
gigi:hey i kn0w y0u...
hero:hmm??..
gigi:y0u're kim jaejoong!
hero:sshhh!...l0w y0ur v0ice d0wn..
gigi:oh s0rry...
gigi:by the way y0u are n0t familiar with this place right??
hero:well actually...
(he didn't finished his sentence)
gigi:ok then,c0me with me..
She quickly grabbed his hand and dragged him along...
end of chapter one please d0 c0mment~ :thanks:
❤gigid- Number of posts: 5
Age: 14
Location: Australia
Registration date: 2008-07-16 
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